Your whisper is fast and silent. Those are newsreaders.
Here are the promised photos.
I've used a Gosurori pattern as a base for the dress top part. And decided to try to make that on the cloth I had to find out if the size fits me. So this is NOT what the dress will be in these photos.
The dress will have a zipper on the back instead of buttons on the front.
Sewn just to hold parts together, with a light color, without th sewing machine.
I'm asking those who are more experienced in sewing: what's wrong here?

HUGE PICS
I've used a Gosurori pattern as a base for the dress top part. And decided to try to make that on the cloth I had to find out if the size fits me. So this is NOT what the dress will be in these photos.
The dress will have a zipper on the back instead of buttons on the front.
Sewn just to hold parts together, with a light color, without th sewing machine.

I'm asking those who are more experienced in sewing: what's wrong here?

HUGE PICS